Forth Rough Cut Of Our Opening & Improvements To Be Made

• Text change to white not green
• 'Producer and Cinematographer - Mariella Devoil'
• Change title
• Make up production companies -> Copyright issues
• Smaller/ Subtler names
• Consistent placement of names in the bottom left hand corner
• more of a match on action on Frazer on the water scene
• Include the bucket shot?
• 'Set team' take this out  - too ammeter
• Names don't need to be true
• Include surnames
• Aspect Ratio change?

Credit to Mariella for the list

The text is always an issue in this opening because we wanted it broken and jittery but does prove hard to read. To overcome this I made the text bigger however this resulted in the titles being to 'in your face' and taking away from the actual story. To overcome this we are changing the colour to white instead of yellow/green so that it is a bit easier to read. Mariella also wanted to be credited for everything so I have to change that. We also changed the title to Conscience because our previous title is not linked well to our new storyline. I am also keeping the text consistently in the corner because otherwise it is distracting. I again used 'Lionsgate' and I will have to change that to 'Tigersgate' because of copyright grounds. I would change the aspect ratio however it looks ridiculous with the genre of film we chose.